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The pharaoh who preached
the oneness of God
and pride
in imperfect bodies
was posthumously punished
for his lies
the oneness of God
and pride
in imperfect bodies
was posthumously punished
for his lies
Literature
Your Eyes
Your eyes..oh, your eyes,
They're a trap.
I knew they'd catch me,
I knew what was behind that stare,
Not love,
Lust.
My eyes, they kept staring,
Seeking for something,
Something I wanted to have,
Something you couldn't give to me.
My heart, you stole it,
Give it back!
I trusted you,
You betrayed me.
Your heart..oh, your beautiful heart,
I tried to steal it.
I failed.
Your eyes, your beautiful eyes...
Don't want me.
Literature
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pen across paper
the rhythmic tapping of keyboard running
my being is letters
yet i cannot make words
Literature
Starry Eyed
You make maps to ceiling constellations,
and I wanna lie here and trace every line,
until we're lost in the dark matter of your mind.
With arms cooly tucked beneath your head,
you navigate an escape from nothingness.
There is a brilliance spilling from your lips,
as your mouth rambles on and on.
You have long drifted alone with starry eyes,
but now you've found a passenger.
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I'm reading a novel set in the reign of Akhenaten [link] and thought I'd write a quick poem inspired by his story. I was fascinated with all ancient history when I was a child but Egypt in particular and Akhenaten in the particularly particular.
This poem namechecks his religious reforms and how he's depicted in portraits as waif-like rather than the traditional perfectly masculine of pharaohs before and after. Some have speculated that Akhenaten had a genetic defect and chose to portray this rather than hide it. He is also credited as establishing monotheism. Both are disputed by historians but make for a much better story.
And yeah, later Egyptians did some history revisionism, removing his name from records with chisels. He was mentioned (but not by name) in one of my earliest deviations, "non nominandum" [link]
This poem namechecks his religious reforms and how he's depicted in portraits as waif-like rather than the traditional perfectly masculine of pharaohs before and after. Some have speculated that Akhenaten had a genetic defect and chose to portray this rather than hide it. He is also credited as establishing monotheism. Both are disputed by historians but make for a much better story.
And yeah, later Egyptians did some history revisionism, removing his name from records with chisels. He was mentioned (but not by name) in one of my earliest deviations, "non nominandum" [link]
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